6 Comments

1. Les on March 18, 2023 at 9:35 am

   Nice and bright and fresh. I like the new composition.
   Les

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2. Deb on March 18, 2023 at 10:16 am

   I agree. Beautiful bright color, strong values.

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3. Rose on March 18, 2023 at 5:01 pm

   Your redo has great colors, values and shapes. The original seems sad by comparison. I can almost taste the redo fruit!

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4. Susan on March 19, 2023 at 9:16 am

   Your redo has beautiful rich and succulent colors. I also like the way you compositionally located the grapes. They bring you into the painting, and just glow against those bananas. Yummy!

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5. Sharon on March 19, 2023 at 12:14 pm

   Ditto on the redo. The colors, composition and overall painting is lovely. I also like the way you’ve painting that apple!

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6. lynda on March 23, 2023 at 11:07 am

   The second one absolutely glows! And your foreground is so interesting, adding even more color and texture.

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